I have changed quite a lot in my trailer compared to the first draft:
- I have changed my studios as I researched further and found that their credits fit my movie more being an independent studio.
- The broadcasts at the beginning and the narration of Nye since I forgot to include it in my first draft.
- The "from the producers of" credits since I wanted the trailer to sponsor more independent films rather than big credits such as Shaun of the Dead.
- I made the editing a bit more sleek and fast paced.
- I colour matched the scenes (responding to audience feedback)
- I included sound effects such as footsteps, wind, and gravel crunching so people can hear what characters are doing (as my sound wasn't very clear) and to also show my use of technology and sound.
- I changed the "Broken" title to look more like blood and fit more with the Kuleshov editing of the gunshot.
The trailer as a result looks more sleek, fast paced, clear, and more professional compared to my first draft.
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